1. Again, a very exquisite story. Femmeslash is a whole new world for me, and until recently I wouldn't go near it, so even the little scene between Hermione and Ginny was a new experience. I quite like the way you described the happenings, however, in some parts it did feel slightly forced. (Yeah and it could just be me, it's nearing the time when I really ought to be in bed *shrugs*).

As a huge Snape fan I really appreciated your characterisation of him. Actually, I enjoyed all your characterisation. I like the manner in which you write from a character's POV, as if it's not a big deal - this is just the way it is; and, also - the seamless changes between scenes, that was refreshing.

Thanks for sharing.